~~Jagatar Singh Hawara~~

[sherni85]

Jagtar Singh Hawara

Aakhe sher Jagatar singh haske apni mata nu

Jo tain lard lydaye uh na dillon bhulavan

Sohe Khardke tere maa maafi mangan es gal di

Puryian ni kar sakda terian jo chahvan

Ik than te mangani mein bin puchyian karlai ah

Jay tu janana chohani eh sara khol ke haal sunavan

Uhnu mout-mout aakh ke balounde nay

Jihde naal lainyian tere sher ne lavan

Tu v dekhengi ik din mere gal vich honagyian

Khunni churde valyian usadyian jo vahnvan.

Ni maaye vaar vaar na ouna is husan jawani nay

Kahe “Mohanpuri” safali karke jana!!

p.s. This poem is written by my tayaji.....and mohanpur is our pind's name...

[Sony]

waheguru jio

very nicely done :doh:

if u have more please post them!!

[sherni85]

thanks!

and yes i will post some more......later

[gupt_paapi]

thanks!

and yes i will post some more......later

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sherni ji nice 2 no sum1 lyked my pics (ur avatar lol) can u gimme feedback too ji? how 2 improve.. n yeh i fink its menna be "mera" not "meri" lol

btw loved the poem :doh: :e:

[sherni85]

thanks!

and yes i will post some more......later

107581[/snapback]

sherni ji nice 2 no sum1 lyked my pics (ur avatar lol) can u gimme feedback too ji? how 2 improve.. n yeh i fink its menna be "mera" not "meri" lol

btw loved the poem :doh: :e:

107584[/snapback]

lolz...... wait i didn't get what u meant by "mera" or "meri" thing.........can u plz explain....

and thanks!!

[Akaal Purakh Di Fauj]

:doh: wow amazing poem, thanks for sharing paaji/bhenji

[sherni85]

:doh: wow amazing poem, thanks for sharing paaji/bhenji 

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hehe....thanks ji!!!!

but i think SHERNI would make me BHEN...........hehe..not a problem though

[gupt_paapi]

thanks!

and yes i will post some more......later

107581[/snapback]

sherni ji nice 2 no sum1 lyked my pics (ur avatar lol) can u gimme feedback too ji? how 2 improve.. n yeh i fink its menna be "mera" not "meri" lol

btw loved the poem :doh: :e:

107584[/snapback]

lolz...... wait i didn't get what u meant by "mera" or "meri" thing.........can u plz explain....

and thanks!!

107593[/snapback]

haha aww penji u no ur avatar yeh i put meri insted of mera... the punjabi writing?

lol koina ill send u the corected version :TH:

[sherni85]

thanks!

and yes i will post some more......later

107581[/snapback]

sherni ji nice 2 no sum1 lyked my pics (ur avatar lol) can u gimme feedback too ji? how 2 improve.. n yeh i fink its menna be "mera" not "meri" lol

btw loved the poem :doh: :e:

107584[/snapback]

lolz...... wait i didn't get what u meant by "mera" or "meri" thing.........can u plz explain....

and thanks!!

107593[/snapback]

haha aww penji u no ur avatar yeh i put meri insted of mera... the punjabi writing?

lol koina ill send u the corected version :TH:

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lolz.......that's ok.........well i'm really gud when it comes to typing in punjabi so i notice lil things easly...........so jst sooooooo gud in it, plus my punjabi is pure pendu.................... :doh:

[Dalvir]

thats just an awesome poem!!! Kau Waheguru!