How Poetic Can You Be?

[googleme]

Listen up my honey's! I want the users of this board to engage in a little poetry :rolleyes:

The poem has to mainly focus on Sikh stuff!!

I will write the 1st line... then the next person rhymes the 2nd line... and the person after that does the 3rd line and so on and so on...

Dont be shy, give it a try!

here goes:

My tongue is sharper then a double edge sword...

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[Singhstah]

my heart can only be softened by my dear Lord.

[googleme]

And when i bow to thee, my heart then applauds...

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[Singh559]

As you catch a glimpse of the cold and unsympathetic gate, you walk as if you are already dead.

[googleme]

my foot steps continue, searching for answers, my vision is blurey...

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[Singhstah]

Yet my master carries me forward, every step that I tread

[Paneer Monster]

'sup bee.....

sorry to inturrupt your little poetry flow, but whilst were on the subject of poetry, why dont you share that poem you so passionatly read out in do-jo?.... you know, the one about the gun :lol:

[googleme]

And every step that i tread, makes my soul very blessed...

( Yo 'paneer monster' leave my gun poem out of this! i was young(er) and immmature!! Now behave before i instruct press-ups upon you...! )

im liking the way this poem is going! keep up the good work :rolleyes:

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