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Ghostwriter AJ

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  1. Ez. First time on the site and I saw your problem so I registered. I'm a lyricist and I believe you can fix your problem by changing the words instead. It will still carry the same rhythm and flow, and at the same time carry the same meaning.

    e.g.

    CHANGE-

    "you try to protect your home with whatever possible

    you learn to heal yourself and stop fu*in with hospitals"

    TO-

    "you try to protect your home with whatever possible

    you learn to heal yourself and stop messinwith hospitals"

    AND

    CHANGE-

    "A yo, we kill it, you cats better git wit it

    nuthin but justice man, we strong fresh fitted

    if ni*gas is layed out then khalsaforce did it

    find us at the spot with the guns still hot"

    TO-

    "A yo, we kill it, you cats better git wit it

    nuthin but justice man, we strong fresh fitted

    if bodies were layed out then khalsaforce did it

    find us at the spot with the guns still hot"

    Hopefully that should do it?

    AJ

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