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Here's some creative text written by British Sikh Roop Dhillon. He was aiming it at teenagers. It's going to be a fantasy piece like Dark Narnia. He'd appreciate constructive, critical feedback (I've given him mine already). Please do contribute your thoughts, if you're lucky enough to be able to read it. ਨੀਨਾ ਅਤੇ ਇਲਤੀ ਜਿੰਨ ਰੂਪ ਢਿੱਲੋਂ ਬਾਰੀ ਦੇ ਬਾਹਰ ਬਰਸ਼ ਪੈ ਰਿਹਾ ਸੀ। ਏਨਾ ਜ਼ਬਰਦਸਤ ਸੀ ਕਿ ਨੀਨਾ ਨੂੰ ਲੱਗਿਆ ਅੰਬਰ ਵਿੱਚੋਂ ਮੇਖਾਂ ਵਾਂਗ ਕਣੀਆਂ ਡਿੱਗ ਰਹੀਆਂ ਸਨ। ਬਾਰੀ ਦੇ ਸ਼ੀਸ਼ੇ ਉੱਤੇ ਖੜਕ ਰਹੀਆਂ ਸਨ। ਨੀਨਾ ਨੇ ਬਾਹਰ ਸ਼ੀਸ਼ੇ ਵਿੱਚੋਂ ਦੇਖਿਆ ਅਤੇ ਸੋਚਿਆ - ਕਾਸ਼! ਹੁਣ ਤਾਂ ਸਿਰਫ਼ ਹੌਮਵਰਕ ਹੀ ਕਰ ਸਕਦੀ ਸੀ!-। ਉਂਝ ਹੋਰ ਕੀ

Promotion of promiscuity, inter-religious marriage of a minority group’s women is an ideal way of obliterating their demographic growth and leading to eventual assimilation. Bollywood loves to show sikh women with turbaned fathers and brothers falling in love with hindu men through daily soaps and films. There was an outcry from the left-media in India when that Kashmiri sikh girl was rescued from her pedo muslim neighbour who had been eyeing/grooming he since she was 14 ! What this Simrin Kaur has sung is not exactly the smoothest way of confronting this social danger, but nonetheless, i

I have noticed on this forum, I do not go on others, people more interested in the news rather than spiritual threads. I thought the whole point of a Sangat was deal and help our spirituality, but more interested in news thread, there was even a thread about Guru Nanak Ji fist Shabad and you allowed someone to say dogs b....... , VID-20210919-WA0000.mp4