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"Him"

How do we get closer with Him?

Not with wealth

How can we touch his lotus feet that glisten with eternal bliss

Only by remembering his name, the name that all people utter

Utter in help

Utter in Joy

Utter

With his beauty uncompelled with his power unfathomable

How do we, as little as we are greet His blessedness

Only when we recite the True Name will the true blood flow sinful corpse.

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Please criticize, and help me correct and make it better

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I was thinkin of not using "Him" but cant find another way, and using God is too striaght forward

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Waheguroo Jee Ka Khalsa!

Waheguroo Jee Kee Fateh!!

You are on the right track grin.gif

If you want to use a genderless term for God, try using "the Divine", or "the Divine Beloved" :wub:

will think more and post...just woke up :D

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I redid the poem and added a few lines...

"Him"

How do we get closer to the Divine Beloved?

Not with wealth,

Not with knowledge.

How can we touch His divine lotus feet

that glisten with eternal bliss

Only by remembering his name,

the name that all people utter

Utter in help

Utter in Joy

Utter

With his beauty uncompelled

with his power unfathomable

How do we, as little as we are, greet His blessedness?

Only when we recite the True Name

will the true blood flow through our sinful corpses.

Only with his name are we granted the vision or truth,

only then is the light truly visible.

Only then is the cobweb blinding our third eye removed.

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re did the poem again...sorry if that bothers any1

Him

How do we get closer to the Divine Beloved?

Not with wealth,

Not with knowledge.

How can we touch His divine lotus feet.

Feet that glisten with eternal bliss

Only by remembering His name,

the name that all people utter

Utter in need of help

Utter in Joy

Utter

With His beauty uncompelled

With His powers unfathomable

How do we, as little as we are, greet His blessedness?

Only when we recite the True Name,

will the righteous blood flow through our sinful corpses.

Only with His name are we granted the vision or truth,

only then is the light truly visible.

Only then is the mirror impeding the third eye shattered.

Only those who remember Him will be recognized. Others will be nothing more than an iota of sand in a worldly beach of spirituality.

----Dedicated to all those who have selflessly served all of mankind.

Devinder Singh

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