God helping a boy (

[prabjit singh khalsa]

vaheguru ji ka khalsa!

vaheguru je kai fateh!

this is my first story and i mysel made it up... short story really short

There was this boy and his parents like most parents well like some parents always cared for the expensive things they buy. so one day they bought this extremly expensive table, the boy was running around the house playing with toys when suddenly hit the table knocking it over and somehow cracking it in half. The parents heard this and ran into the living room and went straight to the table and picked it up, overlooking the table they forgot the boy. The boy was on the ground crying and rubbing a small bump on his knee, then suddenly god raised the boy on his feet and wipped away his tears, god smiled and the boy smiled back

moral of the story when you are hurt and everyone's attention is on richly evil things god is there raising you and wiping away ur tears.

first time i wrote a story like this.

hoped you enjoyed and sorry for the spelling mistakes :doh:

bul chak maf

vaheguru ji ka khalsa!

vaheguru ji kai fateh!

[`KuMi´]

OoOoO got a little Shiver well dun

[guruji's_student]

vgjkk vgjkfateh

welldone ji !!!....get writing some more! lolz IM WAITING:)

vgjkk vgjkfateh x

[gupt_paapi]

OoOoO got a little Shiver well dun

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LOOL well maybe coz ur awake 5:53 am!jkes wikid story :TH:

[`KuMi´]

I just could not get to bed, i duno whyyy, well i think i do, buh ill tell u on msn, and my belly hurting

and about

3 ish i went to the toilet, nd der was dis great huggggggeeeee moth, i fort forget dat, soo frommm up stairs i went allllllllllllllllllllll the way dwnstairs, in dat toilet, nd in dat wun der was dis huge spider, i didnt do a weeeee, nd wen i did my belli srts hurting

n the moral of my storie is that wen u need a wee at nite time, close ur eyes so u dont se ne creatures, so its either do a wee nd get battered by ur mummi cus u wet the whole flooor, or suffer like i had to belive me it hurtsssssssssss

[Guest Faujan]

awwww, poor Kumi LOL. Oh God, are you okay though? I think you might be getting sick. take care of yourself . . . . . and close your eyes next time :doh: hope you feel better soon

Loved the story Jiyo, WRITE MORE, WRITE MORE! and don't hesitate next time - just write. that's the whole point.

[prabjit singh khalsa]

thanks ya i'll write more when i think of some more storys.