You Can't See My Pain

[vikramjitsingh]

Fateh parwaan karro jiyo Shastr ji,

I speak on behalf of Mehtab , Amrit and self,

This kind of poetry is not available 'off the shelf'.

It just comes rolling out,

And it can be easily tested if you have any doubt.

I live in Chandigarh and if you happen to come here you can check me out,

Someone else's poetry as mine I do not tout.

Yes all of us can rhyme but one has to discover in oneself this art,

I'd advice you jaldi naal karro rhyming start.

And thank you Amrit ji for your advice,

You've indeed been very nice.

Guru Rakha

[AmarjitKaur]

Veerji, just a minor correction. Its Amarjit, not Amrit.

And Shastr bhaji was just kidding around. Read his status page, he is bored at his uni :-))

How come I don't get free time to feel bored. I am always occupied, with thoughts, work, listening to katha/keertan or reciting some bani.

as my kids say, its not fair. you have time to get bored and I don't. Do u have 24hrs in a day as well, or its longer where u are :-)) ?

[vikramjitsingh]

Fateh parwaan karro jiyo,

I'm 50+ ...nowadays I'm more of a vela,

Its more like standing on the sidelines and watching zindagi da mela.

Not that I've not been busy as I worked 48 hours a day x 8 days a week,

Though I wish that was not my peak!

Because I plan start anew,

Planning to start something new.

But even during my vela time HE's been kind,

Writing and golf have kept me from going 'out of my mind'!

Dukh has indeed been a daaru for me,

Guruji's analogy of Dukh Daaru Sukh Rogh bhaya now I clearly see.

My request to the Sangat is for me please do pray,

From HIS path come 'rain or shine' I never stray.

Guru Rakha