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Gurfateh-- i had an idea pop into my mind today..

We have story threads so why not a poem thread. I will start of with a four line verse and then someone continues and continues with how ever many lines ... a never ending poem..

This way you can express how you feel but in poem form!! Lets try and keep this going guys..

i'll start..

I shake myself vigorously

My lips quiver

The cold wind brushes by

Nothing but my empathy on the line

**Now someone write a few lines or a verse or even one line!! **

IK ONG KAAR SATGURU PRASAD!!

Wonderful thread.. please allow me to contribute :

I am so lost and so blue..

I look up to none.. other than you....

Here .. hold my hand n guide me through...

I look up to none.. other than you..

You are my soul n so truee..

Can't trust ne one but you..

Here.. hold my hand n guide me through..

I look up to none .. other than you..

Bhul chuk maaf karnee ji..

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Gurfateh-- i had an idea pop into my mind today..

We have story threads so why not a poem thread. I will start of with a four line verse and then someone continues and continues with how ever many lines ... a never ending poem..

This way you can express how you feel but in poem form!! Lets try and keep this going guys..

i'll start..

I shake myself vigorously

My lips quiver

The cold wind brushes by

Nothing but my empathy on the line

**Now someone write a few lines or a verse or even one line!! **

Saadh Sangat ji..

Please keep this thread alive with your valued contributions..

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looking back at my life again

i see countless mistakes again

i am ashamed of them again

but then why do i still make the same mistakes again?

why do i still feel attraction towards corruption again?

why again?

there is this mystery again

i would love to solve it before this vessel breaks again

lol i think i got too many "again"'s there haha ah well you all know i suck at writing poems

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looking back at my life again

i see countless mistakes again

i am ashamed of them again

but then why do i still make the same mistakes again?

why do i still feel attraction towards corruption again?

why again?

there is this mystery again

i would love to solve it before this vessel breaks again

Like you say - again and again we all make mistake again

But its the time we understand what really is a mistake again

Is this is a mistake if one dies in vain (Moh)

Well, everyone who is living has to go thru some pain

Is it doing the work for you own gain (Lobh)

This will keep you locked up in the lifecycle chain

Is it warmth at night, with a body not yours to claim (Kaam)

Not only it will bring a name but it will keep you far from being sane

Is it to act and put a bullet thru one's brain (Krodh)

Remember, this is someone's life and you gotta know,this isn't no game

Is it in putting everyone lower and thinking you are the Man (Ahankar)

History is the evidence, Ego will always leave you stranded in a single plane

We "The Sikhs" have been blessed with "Gurbani" to keep us in the Lane....

(And I personally believe the biggest mistake is the mistake of making the mistake again)

Bhul Chul mauff .....

Guru Ang Sang

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Divine Light

chaaron taraf

In all the directions

noor-un-ala, noor-un-ala, noor-un-ala-noor

The Divine Light

yeh barkh-e-tajalli andheron ko cheerti

This showering brilliance, pierces the darkness

yahaan bhi tu, vahaan bhi tu

You are omnipresent

yeh roshni kya roshni

This radiance! What a brilliance!

tere siva koi hai ke poochhoon

Is there someone else, besides you, whom I can ask

andheron se poochha to chup ho gaye, chup ho gaye

I asked the darkness, they remained in quietude

ujaalon se poochha to sharmaa gaye, sharmaa gaye

I asked the brightness, they became shy

parindon se poochha kahaan parwaaz hai

I asked the birds, where is the flight

khamoshi se poochha kahaan aawaaz hai

I asked the silence, where is the sound

phoolon se patton se

From flowers and leaves

rangon se aayi sadaa

From the colors came ever-blossoming charm

uthaayi chilman to dekha jalwa tera

The curtain lifted only to see your splendor

badhaaya kadam to manzil teri manzil teri

Took steps and found your haven

uthaayi nazar to soorat teri, soorat teri

lifted my eyes and saw your face

bhanwarein ki gun-gun mein

In the buzzing of the bees

kangan ki khan-khan mein

In the sound of the bracelets

aashiq ke tan-man mein

In the body and minds of the lover

birhan ke nainan mein

In the eyes of a woman who is separated from her beloved

gaanon mein sargam mein, taanon mein sargam mein bas tu hai tu hi tu

In every song, melody, tune I only found You only You

- Noor-un-ala, Meenaxshi, M.F. Hussain

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